Me and Lukas' fish bone diagram about the red panda

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This is an activity we did when we were learning how to find facts and put them in the right box on  a fishbone diagram. We are learning how to write a report about an animal which is native to China. We are learning about China at the moment because last week was Chinese language week and one of our classmates, Braeden, is half Chinese. I decided to put a photo of my animal on the background of my fishbone diagram and publish it just like that.

Something I think I have done well  is making sure I got the right facts in the right box.

Next time I think I could improve by writing more notes and fewer sentences. I need to just write down key words not whole sentences when I am making notes.

Ka kite ano

Mt Ruapehu drawing

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This is an activity we did when we were learning how to use Google Drawings.

Something I think I have done well  is using a combination of shapes, pictures and text.

Next time I think I could improve on is making the deadline.

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Piper's lodge thank you letter

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This is an activity we did when we were learning how to write thank you letter's

Something I think I have done well  is doing in inside the deadline, but

next time I think I could improve by putting gems in their.

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8 September 2016

Room 9

Ohaeawai Primary

Tennyson Street

Ohaeawai 0472

Dear Piper’s Lodge

I am writing to thank you very much for looking after us so well during our stay last week.

I really enjoyed the whole week because your beds were comfy, your bathrooms were clean and fresh and your meals were delicious. My favourite meal was the fish and chips.

I hope I can come and stay at Piper’s Lodge again, one day.

Yours sincerely

Freedom Haare.

Thank you letter

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This is an activity we did when we were learning how to write a thank you letter.

Something I think I have done well is writting it by myself. but

next time I think I could improve by writting a bit more.

Ka kite ano

7 September 2016

Room 9

Ohaeawai Primary

Tennyson Street

Ohaeawai 0472

Dear Mum and Dad

I am writing to thank you very much for letting  me last go on the ski trip last week.

I really enjoyed the whole week and skiing was amazing. My favourite part was having a rockwall race with Lukas.

I would really love to go skiing again, one day.

Love from Freedom

Ski Trip 2016

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This is an activity we did when we were learning how to ski

Something I think I have done well  is skiing down Mt Ruapehu but

next time I think I could improve on stopping.

This is how to stop.

Ka kite ano