Friday, 26 August 2016
Wednesday, 17 August 2016
Writing challenge
Hi today we were given free choice writing for 20 minutes and people were much more positive but when the teacher tells us what to do because we don't have any ideas in what the teacher my tell to do.
Freedom's original.
In the bush I went for a walk and suddenly I found a cave. I went through it and started walking, it was dark but that didn't scare me. There was bats they screeched and screeched that's all I could hear. Then I found some stairs I took them and they led me to this secret underground hideout thing. I didn't know what I was seeing I said to myself is this even real or not so I slap myself ran into a wall and then I realized it was real. I was walking around and then I found an alley way, I walked through their and their were voices coming from the other side. I started touching the wall and I pushed this brick in and there was a secret door behind it. I took it that led me to some glowing place. I followed the glow and it led me to a treasure chest I couldn't believe my eyes I was touching it and felt real so I took some. After that I went back through the alley and the cave and made my way home. When I got "I said mum look at this gold it's real" even touch it. "Were RICH"
Buddy edit.
In the bush I went for a walk and suddenly I found a cave. I went through it and started walking, it was dark but that didn't scare me. There was bats they screeched and screeched that's all I could hear. Then I found some stairs I took them and they led me to this secret underground hideout thing. I didn't know what I was seeing I said to myself is this even real or not so I slap myself ran into a wall and then I realized it was real. I was walking around and then I found an alley way, I walked through their and their were voices coming from the other side. I started touching the wall and I pushed this brick in and there was a secret door behind it. I took it that led me to some glowing place. I followed the glow and it led me to a treasure chest I couldn't believe my eyes I was touching it and felt real so I took some. After that I went back through the alley and the cave and made my way home. When I got "I said mum look at this gold it's real" even touch it. "Were RICH".
Freedom's original.
In the bush I went for a walk and suddenly I found a cave. I went through it and started walking, it was dark but that didn't scare me. There was bats they screeched and screeched that's all I could hear. Then I found some stairs I took them and they led me to this secret underground hideout thing. I didn't know what I was seeing I said to myself is this even real or not so I slap myself ran into a wall and then I realized it was real. I was walking around and then I found an alley way, I walked through their and their were voices coming from the other side. I started touching the wall and I pushed this brick in and there was a secret door behind it. I took it that led me to some glowing place. I followed the glow and it led me to a treasure chest I couldn't believe my eyes I was touching it and felt real so I took some. After that I went back through the alley and the cave and made my way home. When I got "I said mum look at this gold it's real" even touch it. "Were RICH"
Buddy edit.
In the bush I went for a walk and suddenly I found a cave. I went through it and started walking, it was dark but that didn't scare me. There was bats they screeched and screeched that's all I could hear. Then I found some stairs I took them and they led me to this secret underground hideout thing. I didn't know what I was seeing I said to myself is this even real or not so I slap myself ran into a wall and then I realized it was real. I was walking around and then I found an alley way, I walked through their and their were voices coming from the other side. I started touching the wall and I pushed this brick in and there was a secret door behind it. I took it that led me to some glowing place. I followed the glow and it led me to a treasure chest I couldn't believe my eyes I was touching it and felt real so I took some. After that I went back through the alley and the cave and made my way home. When I got "I said mum look at this gold it's real" even touch it. "Were RICH".
Monday, 1 August 2016
Snow
On the holidays Me and my Sister went to the snow down by Turangi. It was the mountain just before national park. When we first got there we play across the road from the car park. Then when we finished there we went and caught the bus up to the chair lift we caught it down to happy valley and then we got a sled. When we got our sled we went to the the sled area.We watch a few people and then we went for a turn, to stop the sled you have to put your feet out on the snow. But we didn't have to because there was a hill that had mats to stop you. We played there for about 2 hours.
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