Piper's lodge thank you letter

Kia ora

This is an activity we did when we were learning how to write thank you letter's

Something I think I have done well  is doing in inside the deadline, but

next time I think I could improve by putting gems in their.

Ka kite ano

8 September 2016

Room 9

Ohaeawai Primary

Tennyson Street

Ohaeawai 0472

Dear Piper’s Lodge

I am writing to thank you very much for looking after us so well during our stay last week.

I really enjoyed the whole week because your beds were comfy, your bathrooms were clean and fresh and your meals were delicious. My favourite meal was the fish and chips.

I hope I can come and stay at Piper’s Lodge again, one day.

Yours sincerely

Freedom Haare.

Thank you letter

Kia ora

This is an activity we did when we were learning how to write a thank you letter.

Something I think I have done well is writting it by myself. but

next time I think I could improve by writting a bit more.

Ka kite ano

7 September 2016

Room 9

Ohaeawai Primary

Tennyson Street

Ohaeawai 0472

Dear Mum and Dad

I am writing to thank you very much for letting  me last go on the ski trip last week.

I really enjoyed the whole week and skiing was amazing. My favourite part was having a rockwall race with Lukas.

I would really love to go skiing again, one day.

Love from Freedom

Ski Trip 2016

Kia ora

Kia ora

This is an activity we did when we were learning how to ski

Something I think I have done well  is skiing down Mt Ruapehu but

next time I think I could improve on stopping.

This is how to stop.

Ka kite ano

Taniwha drawings

Writing challenge

Hi today we were given free choice writing for 20 minutes and people were much more positive but when the teacher tells us what to do because we don't have any ideas in what the teacher my tell to do.

Freedom's original.

In the bush I went for a walk and suddenly I found a cave. I went through it and started walking, it was dark but that didn't scare me. There was bats they screeched and screeched that's all I could hear. Then I found some stairs I took them and they led me to this secret underground hideout thing. I didn't know what I was seeing I said to myself is this even real or not so I slap myself ran into a wall and then I realized it was real. I was walking around and then I found an alley way, I walked through their and their were voices coming from the other side. I started touching the wall and I pushed this brick in and there was a secret door behind it. I took it that led me to some glowing place. I followed the glow and it led me to a treasure chest I couldn't believe my eyes I was touching it and felt real so I took some. After that I went back through the alley and the cave and made my way home. When I got "I said mum look at this gold it's real" even touch it. "Were RICH"


Buddy edit.

In the bush I went for a walk and suddenly I found a cave. I went through it and started walking, it was dark but that didn't scare me. There was bats they screeched and screeched that's all I could hear. Then I found some stairs I took them and they led me to this secret underground hideout thing. I didn't know what I was seeing I said to myself is this even real or not so I slap myself ran into a wall and then I realized it was real. I was walking around and then I found an alley way, I walked through their and their were voices coming from the other side. I started touching the wall and I pushed this brick in and there was a secret door behind it. I took it that led me to some glowing place. I followed the glow and it led me to a treasure chest I couldn't believe my eyes I was touching it and felt real so I took some. After that I went back through the alley and the cave and made my way home. When I got "I said mum look at this gold it's real" even touch it. "Were RICH".

Snow

On the holidays Me and my Sister went to the snow down by Turangi. It was the mountain just before national park. When we first got there we play across the road from the car park. Then when  we finished there we went and caught the bus up to the chair lift we caught it down to happy valley and then we got a sled. When we got our sled we went to the the sled area.We watch a few people and then we went for a turn, to stop the sled you have to put your feet out on the snow. But we didn't have to because there was a hill that had mats to stop you. We played there for about 2 hours.

Time test

Kia Ora
Today we had to do a test at the end of our time unit. I got 97%. The only question I got wrong was the one about reading a calendar. I made a silly mistake because I misread a question. It said January but I read it as February. In the pretest  I got 100% so my teacher said that next time I need to slow down a bit.