Group writing

Kia Ora

Today and yesterday we have been working in little groups of 4 to write a paragraph to suit the 3 pictures. They have to include similies, metaphors and personificatipon and has to start with a hook.

Ka kite ano

	Bam!! I whipped Neo. He finally started to trot away and we all yelled “Hooray Neo hooray.” We started to head out for a magnificent day in the bush. As we arrived at our destination we all settled down and had some delicious food, it tasted so good I nearly fainted for it. We carried on like a bunch of crazy hyenas running for some tasty prey. Owww Carlos got bucked by the horse and  fell on the rock. We all stopped and helped him up we had a few bandages, we put them where he was bleeding. As the day carried on we all put our horses in the float and went home in our Holden Colorado.
	Have you ever failed a trick before? As the two amazing motor bike riders zoomed in the air to do a backflip. The wind whistled to me. They look like birds doing tricks in the air one of them landed and one of them didn’t she failed. The boy was Carlos and the girl that failed was called Aliah  who was an Italian. Carlos was from New Zealand. People ran from the crowd to help her. They took her to the hospital. The end.
	“Blow over” yelled the half back. The half back passed the ball to a prop to bowl over the opposition like a bowling ball. The grass waved at the player from everywhere. The other forwards clean out. The No. 9 goes to his backs I catch the ball and through the hands it goes. Have you ever got tackled before? Cause I know I have. Now it’s the backs turn to blow over the half back calls P.I.G the lock takes it. Where in their danger zone now. “Out to the back” I yelled. I catch the ball and I got smashed over like a conversion kick. I placed the ball back and the loose forward Lukas scored the try.