Kia OraThis week we did a recount about something we've done before. Our focus this week was similies, metaphors and personification. The highlighted words are my good examples about my writing. See if you can find some good thing too.Ka kite ano.
Yahoo!!! “Dad get up it’s Sunday, Nitro Circus is today.” My dad and I got drinks and some snacks ready to go. The car roared like a lion. Out the driveway we go. When we got to Whangarei we had lunch at Burger King. After that we headed out to Onerahi where my aunty lives, that's where my uncle and cousins were waiting. Yuss!! It’s time we went to the stadium and, “Whoa, look at that line of people” I yelled impatiently. We parked up and waited in line. We got inside and me and my dad ran like cheetahs to the merchandise shop and we bought a jersey for me. We quickly found our seats before it started. The motorbikes linedup ready to flip like gymnasts. The motorbikes went soaring through the air like an eagle. Now the scooters were ready to go down the mega ramp. They went down, the scooter did a tailwhip like a dog chasing it’s tail. This guy on roller blades went down the mega ramp as fast as a man eating tiger. Bruce Cook was told he wouldn't get back on his motor bike again, but he didn’t listen and upgraded his bike so everything was on the handle bars. He got on his motorbike and did a backflip and landed it. Three people got picked out of the shouting crowd. They got motor bike gears on, they all hopped on the motor bike and went up this ramp and landed a backwards flip. The motor bikes had to follow the leader but upside down like screaming monkeys. When they finished their flips and tricks they did wheelies like horses bucking them off.Me and my dad had a great time at the Nitro Circus.
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